The poem effectively centers around a metaphor       /3
which is developed throughout the text.
 
 

Lining works to enhance and focus meaning.       /2
 
 

The poem includes words with strong emotive
qualities and clear images.         /2
 
 

The poem includes at least three vivid, striking
figurative images.  (Use of simile, metaphor, personification)     /2
 
 

The poem is at least 15 words long.        /1

                                                                                                                                                TOTAL       /10